Tyricee Pelzer-Helium- Black basketball history

1. I reviewed the prompt on Basketball history: Integration of basketball. 2. I learned that the all-negro team had an illegal game with the university of Duke in 1944. This was the first time black displayed there talent on the hardware floor introducing the fast-break offense. 3. The writer use writing element first by giving us the history behind it. Then, the writer came with the facts on how the great players influence college. 4. One mistake I observed was how the writer jumped from civil rights movement to basketball, back to Martin Luther King it was fishey.lol. 5. If i was writing a essay in response i would also mention the great white player, or hipanic players. We all have an impact on the sport of basketball no matter your color, or race.
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