The prompt I reviewed was the best dog breeds for children. I learned that there are a few breeds that are not good for children but there is one breed that is mentioned in all three that seems to be one of the best. It is the Labrador Retrievers. The author of essay one uses writing elements and organizes everything in a way so the reader would understand it. The authors of the lesser essays more listed and put point by point in their essays. The one in the middle essay put everything by catagory. They labled each part of the essay. I would write my response like the person in the first essay and organize everything to get my point across.
essay 1: http://www.helium.com/items/1583067-dogs-for-children
essay 2: http://www.helium.com/items/1586854-best-dog-breeds-for-children-best-dog-breeds
essay 3: http://www.helium.com/items/1586113-lhasa-apso
Saturday, October 3, 2009
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