Tuesday, October 6, 2009
E.Jones Journal Article Soccer
1. The article name is Hard Return and is an article from sports illustrated about Hope Solo and her problems with the U.S. National team and fight back to the team after disrespecting her coach and team mates. I found this article by using NC Live and researching articles that had to do with women's soccer then looking through all of the results. This article made me think of how precious your teammates thoughts are about you. Without respect for each other on the team it makes it very difficult for the team to properly function and understand each other. The author used personal quotes from all parties discussed in the article which very much so backed up the entire article. This article was very organized and easy to follow, because I was not aware of the issues on the team before the World Cup, the article explained the whole situation from he start so I could completely understand it then hear the news about it. The writing ability of this author I found to be pretty high because it did use all components of an essay we have discussed in class, like hook,purpose,body, transitions, introduction and conclusion. If I were using this article as the topic for my paper I would use some of the quotes by Solo's teammates and herself about the situation and how she was able to come up from this situation. If I were writing about this possible topics would be the difference between men's and women soccer, can a team function if there are some problems off the field and sports team conflicts. These topics would be easily talked about using this article.
Rashawndra-Helium
http://www.helium.com/items/1194926-how-to-prevent-holiday-weight-gain
1. How to prevent holiday weight gain.
2. From the article I learned how to not eat certain foods where it will make me gain weight that I do not want.
3. The writer used the writing elements of presenting the correct facts.
4. The articles at the end are the worst articles. It just gives the opinions of the writers themselves and not any facts.
5. If I were to write an essay on this article than I would not write it where it is a biased essay so i would take that approach differently than the bad articles.
Football-Helium-Ty
1. Tips on Improving your basketball game.
2. The best article gave specifics facts on how to improve your game correctly, me being a basketball player and all I knew that what the writer presented was true.
3. The first article was the best one. The writer used elements of correct citations forms.
4.The bad articles could have worked on using more evidence in the text.
5. If I had to write an essay on the article than I would approach the prompt with writing how I use basketball as my own personal use.
moriah browne how to cope with loss a dog
The article that i read was on how to cope with losing a dog. In my opinion i think you can't cope with it more like you can move on and get another one, I did it when my dog pass away. The first article that i read, about the subject was very informative. it gave detail on how important the bog was to her, how the dog die and what the dog name. It also gave me a emotional attachment to the dog, by letting the reader know how upset she was not been there for her childhood friend. the author want into detail on how her family dealt with after the situation of the death of their dog. so with that information you feel the connection with the dog and you.(1 out of 83)
the second paper that i read was OK minus the grammar and the confusion as i was reading. He did state the back round of the dog, for example when and how he got the dog, so now you have a emotional connection also. however, it did not help me by give me suggest on how to cope with losing a dog. It sound to me that he still not over his dog.(43 out of 83)
the last was really bad, the author spelling was all wrong, he did not spell out his words, he shorten words, the work did not make sense. It seem like he was rushing though his work, like he did not want to do the work anymore. The author and i did not have no connection what-so-ever. I do not the dog at all. i think it was a wast of time of reading.(83 out of 83)
the second paper that i read was OK minus the grammar and the confusion as i was reading. He did state the back round of the dog, for example when and how he got the dog, so now you have a emotional connection also. however, it did not help me by give me suggest on how to cope with losing a dog. It sound to me that he still not over his dog.(43 out of 83)
the last was really bad, the author spelling was all wrong, he did not spell out his words, he shorten words, the work did not make sense. It seem like he was rushing though his work, like he did not want to do the work anymore. The author and i did not have no connection what-so-ever. I do not the dog at all. i think it was a wast of time of reading.(83 out of 83)
Helium- Sabrina Ashley
Sould dogs be indoor or outdoor pets?
In the article one person believes that a dog should live outside so he can be dominant of his own dog house and be protective. Whereas the person that believes a dog should be inside thinks that since a dog is mans best friend that the animal should live inside and be a part of the family and receieve more attention that it would outside chained or fenced up with no freedom. i believe that a dog can live both indoor and outdoor, it can be close to the family and protective, but also stay inside when necessary. My dog will growl, and bark insde, and outwen needed to. On the other hand some dogs are just indoor dogs and not meant to be outdoors. I also believe that dogs can recieve more attention indoors than out, because you know they are always there, i am not real big on chaining or locking dogs up unless they are left out so often. Just think about it would you lock your child up or chained up outside? The stronger article has more supporting details and the lesser article talks about other things besides just being an indoor dog, this article also goes into training you dog, and trying to bond with he/she. I learned the views of different people and that a dog can either be indoor or outdoor and the goods and flaws of having a dog indoors or outdoors.
In the article one person believes that a dog should live outside so he can be dominant of his own dog house and be protective. Whereas the person that believes a dog should be inside thinks that since a dog is mans best friend that the animal should live inside and be a part of the family and receieve more attention that it would outside chained or fenced up with no freedom. i believe that a dog can live both indoor and outdoor, it can be close to the family and protective, but also stay inside when necessary. My dog will growl, and bark insde, and outwen needed to. On the other hand some dogs are just indoor dogs and not meant to be outdoors. I also believe that dogs can recieve more attention indoors than out, because you know they are always there, i am not real big on chaining or locking dogs up unless they are left out so often. Just think about it would you lock your child up or chained up outside? The stronger article has more supporting details and the lesser article talks about other things besides just being an indoor dog, this article also goes into training you dog, and trying to bond with he/she. I learned the views of different people and that a dog can either be indoor or outdoor and the goods and flaws of having a dog indoors or outdoors.
Poindexter Helium
the helium that i read talks about how to keep your feet healthy and free of callaus. the first artical give you three steps that will help prevent callaus. each step is in great detail, and it gives you the time period in wgich these steps should be performed. it also tells you how to prevent cracks that may appear on your feet. for this they give you different steps to follow. the ast artical they give you differnt techinques on how to keep your feet smooth ad free from cracks, where the first only gave you one. also in this artical they do not go into depth about how long you should treat your your feet for callaus. it also don't go into detail on how to treat your feet during the callaus removal. the middle artical also talks about the removal of callaus, they also give you more then one way to remove calluse unlike the first artica that ony gave you one. although they gave you mulitple ways to take care of your feet they did not go into great detail.
Helium 10/7 Young koun Jeon Honolulu
1. Best Honeymoon location Honolulu, HI
2. I could learn about the hotel and place where I can stay nights, the web sites where I can get information about Honolulu, and compliments about Honolulu.
3. The information informed by best rated article is more detained than other two articles. The detailed information is very helpful.
4. The other two articles did contain the information about Honolulu, but the information was not detailed enough and did not use proper vocabulary.
5. I will gather the information about Honolulu first, I organize the information which information is good for explaining Honolulu, and then write down what I researched and make my own commments.
Stumble 10/2 Cheyanne Small
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1RpKsU/www.simonseeks.com/blog/weird-wonderful-amazing-beaches-world/i
I found this to be interesting because it shows the most amazing beaches. Some of these beaches are really interesting. I think that anyone who finds traveling interesting would like to see these beaches. This website is cited well. I wonder who finds these places?
This website caught my attention because they have posted pictures of houses that resemble cartoon shows or there favorite cartoon. This one is a house of hello kitty, I found this to be really interesting. People who like looking at what people have done to there homes would find this interesting. Although its not cited well it gives many other pictures to look at. What would make someone want to do there house like this?
I found this website to be interesting because it shows weird creatures that people are not used to seeing. This could be found interesting to my classmates if they like seeing things that are not normal such as these creatures. The website is not cited but has many pictures so that you can keep looking further. Where do they find all these weird creatures?
Jamara Cook
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1FhFTI/www.demonbaby.com/pics/americanworld.gif/
I stumbled across a picture or a globe in map form. The title was "The World According to Americans." All the other countries had something negative on the nation besides America. I do not think that's is right, not all Americans think of other counties in a negative way. This may be why all the other counties despise American and want to destroy us.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#8I07QD/www.youtube.com/watch?v=0I4VKj4d0WI/
I came across a video on youtube called amazing. It is about a man doing bubble magic. I do not know how he can make all the creations he did with out popping the bubble. He even blew smoke in the bubble and let the smoke out. I was a neat thing to watch.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#31nEMz/haha.nu/creative/how-to-make-roses-from-maple-leaves//
Last but not least I stumbled across a seriers of picture that showed you how to make roses out of maple leaves. I think you have to be very artistic. You roll a lot of leaves together and it creates a roses. After you tie the leaves together with some string it looks just like a awkard colored rose.
I stumbled across a picture or a globe in map form. The title was "The World According to Americans." All the other countries had something negative on the nation besides America. I do not think that's is right, not all Americans think of other counties in a negative way. This may be why all the other counties despise American and want to destroy us.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#8I07QD/www.youtube.com/watch?v=0I4VKj4d0WI/
I came across a video on youtube called amazing. It is about a man doing bubble magic. I do not know how he can make all the creations he did with out popping the bubble. He even blew smoke in the bubble and let the smoke out. I was a neat thing to watch.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#31nEMz/haha.nu/creative/how-to-make-roses-from-maple-leaves//
Last but not least I stumbled across a seriers of picture that showed you how to make roses out of maple leaves. I think you have to be very artistic. You roll a lot of leaves together and it creates a roses. After you tie the leaves together with some string it looks just like a awkard colored rose.
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