Justin Katz Helium 11/30

The topic I chose to review discusses which is better, a male or female dog. I learned a great deal about the similarities and differences between male and female dogs. With the best essays, the authors gave examples by using experiences they have had with both male and female dogs. The essays that weren't as good and they weren't really organized. If I wrote an essay on this topic, I would support that male dogs are better. This is because every dog I've had has been a male.

Justin Katz Helium 11/30

The topic I chose to review this time discusses what to expect when getting a new puppy. I learned by reading these that puppies aren't as easy as people think they are. They take a great deal of training and are quite expensive. The author of the best essay explained a great deal of things. This author also compared getting a new puppy to a great deal of things, which makes the truth become reality. With the essay that wasn't the highest ranked, the author didn't really take time to organize the essay as well. the author also didn't make it interesting as much as the best essay was. If I wrote an essay on this, I would probably write similar to how the best writer did. I would compare having a puppy to other things to draw in peoples' attention as well as make it interesting for them.

Justin Katz Helium 11/30

I reviewed articles on how aggressive dogs can be rehabilitated. I learned from these articles that there are a great deal of ways to rehabilitate aggressive dogs without using Euthanasia. With the best essay, the author used a great deal of organization and writing concepts to make their essay great as well as unique. The lesser essay wasnt as organized and they didnt have supporting facts. If I wrote an article on this topic, I would list the types of ways to rehabilatate dogs as well as explain each step in trying to rehabilitate a dog.