Tuesday, September 15, 2009
9/15 Helium Will Chase
My prompt was about necessities in your college dorm room. It talks about four things, personal hygiene, laundry, bedding, and studying. Then it tells about each category in a paragraph. I learned that we can spend up to about a third of our lives in bed. In the best prompt the author organized it by talking about each category in a different paragraph. In the lesser prompts the author did the same thing by talking about each category. But they talked about to many. If I were to write about this prompt I would pick five major categories and talk a little about each one.
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