helium frazier first dates

The prompt I choose to review was on people first dates. The best article I read was very interesting. She talked about how she was new in the dating scene, because she had just gotten out of a bad marriage. She used her life experiences in her old marriage, to help shape what she wanted her dating to be like. The last article about first date was just to wordy for me. I lost focus in the middle of the story. Compare to the first article, I think it was less detail in a way that it did not get straight to the point.