Gooding-Helium-Adopting a rabbit

Everybody has their dream of a perfect pet. For some its dogs and other's its cats. However, for some it is the love and fluffiness of a rabbit. There are many considerations to think about when getting a rabbit and this helium can answer a lot of people's questions. I reviewed the prompt "Things you need to know before adopting a rabbit". I learned that you can train a house rabbit to use a litter box and that they are very clean animals. However, even though they are litter box trained they are still prone to accidents. The best essay on this topic was very informative. She gave clear differences between caged rabbits and house rabbits. She also told how each one should be taken are of and what their different needs are. For example, a home needs to be rabbit proof if you are to get a house rabbit, but if you have a caged rabbit you must provide a nesting area. The author also talks about the daily needs of a rabbit, such as food, water, and daily grooming. She describes the many health hazards that rabbits are prone to and what can be done to help. The authors is very detailed and you can tell she knows what she's talking about. I feel like the author had a great structure throughout her essay and made it flow really well. For the middle essay I think it was alright. The author knew her points and what she was talking about but she put her points in a list and just left it like that instead of elaborating on each one a little. I didn't really feel like this was an essay. i felt more like it should have been a list at the local pet shop instead of an essay. Other than that I feel like the author knew what she was talking about, but she just needed to elaborate more. For the worst essay it was okay. The author had some good points but the paragraphs seemed to be a little long and run-onish. I feel like she could have separated the paragraphs more to make it flow better and easier to read for most people. I also think that she talked to long about some topics and not as long as others.