Nikki Calhoun Helium 9/15/09

Essay #1 http://www.helium.com/items/1585570-ghosts?page=3
Essay #70 http://www.helium.com/items/1284456-ghost-story-funny-ghost-story-humor-short-story-short-story?page=6
Essay #142 http://www.helium.com/items/152234-short-stories-ghosts?page=2

1. Short Stories: Ghost Stories
2. That there are alot of paranormal beliefs everywhere.
3. Essay #1 seperated all their paragraphs and organized their information really well.
4. Essay #70 wasn't just about ghosts, it was also about an affair and a t.v. show. Essay #142, they made mistakes throught the way they wrote it. They wrote the essay how someone would talk.
5. I would write about ghosts I've seen and researched and start from there. Then I would write from person experiences and try to make it a little more interesting for people to read.