Helium Emily Guenthner

The Prompt that I chose for my Helium blog this week, is The possible link between video game violence and children's behavior. The number one essay brought up a lot of points that could be true about the effects that these violent video games have on the minds of the young children who play them. That mentally and emotionally these children are changing every time that they play these violent video games. The best essay just flowed better than the other two, it was easy to rad and understand what the author wanted us to get out of his paper. The last essay that I read was not as easy or interesting to read at all. I found there to be choppy sentences which made the flow of the paper impossible. If I were going to write on this topic I would make sure to include the facts and give more examples and studies that were done on th
is topic.
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