Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Kody Kuhn

I chose to write about Doberman Pinscher which is my favorite dog breed. I never knew how the Doberman got its name but now I do. The Dobermans name originates from a man in the 1800's named Louis Doberman. Louis was a tax collector and a night watchman so he decided to create a breed of dog that would be a great companion and protector. I didn't know the Doberman was part German Sheperd, German Pinscher,then later was crossed with Greyhound, Weimaraner, Black and Tan Manchester Terrier. That's how the great Doberman Pinscher breed was created. The best essay used legit information, and used correct grammar and punctuation. The lesser essays used more opinionated information, so you cant really know what is true or false about what they write. If I respond to this essay I would do some research on the breed and also I have personal experience on the breed because I use to have one. So I would combined my research and my personal experience to write a response and use truthful information and correct grammar.

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