The eating habits of octopuses (luis amurrio)

The prompt i choose was on the eating habits of octopuses which is a very interesting topic i thought. I learned that octopuses are animals which are intelligent and very similar to humans as well as to there being 100 different species of octopuses also when an octopus puts its tentacles on you and it uses it's suction cups it is able to taste you with them. For the best essay i found the author was able to have very few grammatical errors and made the essay flow smoothly not making you stop to figure out in which direction he is trying to point you in. But for the poorly writen essays they need to have more grammatical corrections and also they would wonder off the topic talking about some other animal the octopus ate which i found quite annoying. So if i was to respond to this topic i would have to do more researching as well as to have a real experience or witness one to surly write a very discriptive and accurate essay on the topic.