Facebook :)

The prompt I chose to read is “Is Facebook Hazardous to Your Career?” I learned that I need to watch what I say and post on facebook because everyone can see it in one way or another and it could affect my career, or stop me from getting a job. In the best essay the author used correct grammar and punctuation. It also had a great flow and was easy to read and understand. In the other essays I noticed the punctuation was not all correct and the writer used incorrect grammar. I also noticed it wasn’t as clear and did not have as much information as the other articles.