Kayla Frazier......Helium Blog One

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For my blog on Helium. I reviewed a topic about the necessity of friendship. I learned that friendship truly is a very important part of your everyday life. Everyone need a special friend that they can talk to, and also have a close relationship with. The author with the best essay did some excellent research, and was very detail in her information that she give to us as reader.
The essay rated 2 out of 5 was not very interesting to me. It did not really keep my attention 100 percent. I thought it was too wordy, and did not get to the point. The last and worst essay did just the opposite as the first essay. It give less details about friendship which is what the topic is about. I don't think his research was good. If I had to write a prompt about this. I would just tell the reader my life experience with many friends, and how they have help me in life.