Tuesday, September 1, 2009

How to raise a Pit Bull- Justin Katz

The reason Pit Bulls are used in dog fights is because they are so eager to please their owners. They were originally bred for bull baiting, which is a sport where 2 or 3 Pit Bulls attack a cow or bull until it dies. The author started with a broad range of dogs and then narrowed it down to Pit Bulls. The paper was also organized well in order of importance, without going off topic. The other essays were all over the place and not organized well. If I were to right an essay, I would first start with the origin of the breed. After I talk about the origin, I would go into the types of Pit Bulls as well as how to feed and train them.

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