HELIUM--Emily Guenthner

Acquiring dogs: Adult or puppy
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For my blog I reviewed a topic on acquiring dogs: adult or puppy. While I was reading I learned that making the choice to get a dog or puppy is only the beginning, there is much more to be considered. Such as where do you live, how active are you, can you financially support a dog/puppy. Getting a dog or puppy is big decision that takes a lot of thought, and should not be rushed through. The best essay put a lot of thought into the essay she took the time to do the research and made sure she had the facts but still made it easy to read and clear to understand. The last place essay was more of a story about themselves than the facts needed to make the decision on whether to get a dog or puppy. The middle essay was pretty clear cut; it gave you the pros and the cons of both a dog and a puppy. It was easy to understand and having all of the facts right there made it easy to compare between a dog and puppy. If I were to write an essay about acquiring dogs: adult or puppy, I would do my best to get the facts out there for people know but yet make it easy to understand. People feel more comfortable when they can read an essay and understand exactly what the author is trying to say. I would want people to know every little everything about choosing between a dog and puppy.