Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Helium #1 Nikki Calhoun

http://www.helium.com/items/1260841-what-is-anorexia-nervosa
http://www.helium.com/items/102896-anorexia-nervosa
http://www.helium.com/items/548748-anorexia-nervosa

The prompt I reviewed was Anorexia Nervosa. I learned that it actually has no cure. Also I learned that it happens mostly in middle to upper-class women. I reviewed essays numbers 1, 15, and 31. The first one used definitions and causes of someone to turn anorexic. Also they sorted their information in paragraphs. The second one used examples and paragraphs to show their information. Also most of it was the author's opinion rather than straight facts like the author in the first one used. The last one doesn't use paragraphs or facts mostly. The essay is mostly made up of questions they are asking the reader. If I were to write an essay about this topic I would start with definitions then include what I know from researching the topic. Also if I knew someone who had experience with this topic, I would go and ask them and quote anything they say in my essay.

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