Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Maryjane is the way to go-Helium-Rashawndra

I read about Marijuana might be good for you. From the topic, I learned that if you have certain cancers or illnesses than their is a great reason for you to smoke marijuana. It is legal in 15 American states as long as you have some sort of doctors notice to take it. The first article was the best because it had informational facts and links so that you can know the sources are cited well and are true so that you can visit them. Compared to the last article, which is the total complete opposite. She, the article writer, goes on about how the drug is bad for you, even if it is for medical reason which is totally biased because she presents no facts so it is just more of an opinion than something she can prove. The first article used the writing elements of clear and concise words when describing the cause of this whole topic that which they are talking about. The last article made the mistake of not including any evidence of which they are presenting, so the reader may think it is something that they do not need to read due to the writer being biased. If I were to write an essay in response than I would totally agree with the first writer. You do not need marijuana to just get high and if you do smoke it than you have to go to jail. Just as if it were cigarettes than the US government can easily put a tax on it if the drug to be legalized, simple as that. You do not need to sneak around if you are a sick person who needs the drug due to your cancer and than get thrown in jail. My opinion.

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