Tuesday, September 29, 2009

E.Jones Helium Organizing Your House

The prompt that I choose to review for this weeks Helium Blog was about how and why it is a good idea to organize your house. It gave reasons such as it becomes why to cluttered and messy looking when unorganized to you do not want to have company and it effects your social life. I learned from the articles I read about some good rules to keep your house from starting to be cluttered. One article gave a good suggestion to get everyone out of the house and work by yourself without any distractions and find a place for everything in your house. If for some reason you are unable to find a place for everything, have a pile set aside for things you do not know where to place. This will allow you later to reorganize or either get rid of things you no longer need. Other articles gave places to start with, like the laundry room, to the living room to the kitchen.

The best essay I read used very logical steps and seemed very organized in writing. This made understanding and seeing eye to eye with her very easy. While reading about why and how you should organize something it is best to know why you should from the beginning. It made me feel more motivated and understood why she was blogging about this in particular. Some of the essays did just jump into how you should begin to organize rather then explain why first. For the worst essays besides being unorganized in writing I thought another thing that they did not do very well was the conclusion. Some of the essays seemed to bring up new points about why you should clean in the last two sentences. This is not very effective especially because these reasons were never mentioned previously to that.

If I were to approach this prompt, I would first make an outline with the reasons why before the actual how to portion of the paper. Some of my reasons that were not covered in my readings that I would include would be, things are easily lost when things are unorganized and you do not remember all the things you do have. I then would make sure not to bring up any major points in the conclusion to finish off my blog.

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