Helium 9/16 Cheyanne Small

I reviewed the prompt about who is responsible for Micheal Jackson's death.I learned that Micheals death was no accident and how it occured. It goes on to tell and describe what they think caused his death. The best essay was written to inform the reader about how he died and how his death is similar to other singers who have passes. I didn't really see any mistakes in this article. If I were to write and essay in response to this one I would have alot more information about the time surrounding his death and less about his childhood i would focus totally on Micheal.