Candace Flowers Helium Recipe for a long and happy life

The prompt that I reviewed was about a recipe for a long and happy life. By reading this essay I learned that in order to have a happy life it is all up to you. You have to be the one who maintains a positive attitude in tough situations. You also have to use manners, be kind and generous, and have a sense of humor. I also learned that kindness goes a long way. If you are kind to someone it will come back to you in return. For the best essay, the author had creativity. They designed the traits and qualities that one needs to have in a real recipe format. The essay flowed well and it contained alot of useful information. In the lesser essays, some of the mistakes that I observed were that the information was not organized. The author would jump from subject to subject and the examples did not flow well with each other. Another mistake that I saw was that the author in the lesser essays did not think expand their mind. They kept it short and simple. If I had to write an essay in response to this topic I would go about the same topics as some of the better essays. I would think of qualities that people need to have in order to have a happy successful stress free life.