Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Why Brett Favre needs to make up his mind !- Bradley King- Helium

For this Helium post I reviewed a article regarding the retirement of one of the greatest NFL quarterbacks of all time, Brett Favre. From reading the articles I learned that Brett Favre really loves the game of football. A few very good points were made regarding his retirement. First many people think that Favre should retire not because we dont think he can make it another season, but for the sake of his family. There were only two essays for this topic, but the first one was by far better than the second. The author of the first one used organization throughout his essay, which made it flow very smooth. The author also gave very good reason to back up what he had to say. The author of the second essay was the total opposite. She did not organize well at all, and did not give many example to back up what she had to say. If I was going to write something on the topic, I would start out by giving Favre some credit for being so loyal to the game. I mean for someone to announce retirement and then take it back really has love for the game.

http://www.helium.com/items/1466433-brett-favre-speculation-on-retirement

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