Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Candace Flowers Helium Betta Fish Facts
The prompt that I reviewed was about Betta fish and how to care for them. By reading this I learned that Betta fish are Siamese fighting fish. If you put two of them in the same bowl, they will fight. You can put two or more fish in a tank if you have dividers in between them. For the best essay, the author used very good details and examples. He talked about how he personally took care of the Betta fish he had and the techniques that he used. In the other essays, some of the mistakes that I saw was the information was not organized well like in the better essays. The essays had good detail but they do not flow together. If I had to write an essay on this topic I would talk about Betta fish history and how to care for them. I would also talk about where you could purchase them if someone was interested in buying them.
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