Luke Perry

The prompt I chose was about “the risk of letting your dogs run loose on the street”. I chose to read this topic due to the fact there have been several issues regarding dogs attacking children in the U.K recently. I found this prompt style used very direct, with its use of subheadings throughout the article which make evident the points that the writer is getting across more sufficiently. Furthermore the style the essay is wrote in helps it to suggest that the writer is speaking to you as the reader personally which further helps to portray their point making it stronger.
The second essay I read was good, however not as effective as the first. It showed some good points, such as addressing the reader and making them aware of the situation, however it did lack some grammar errors and writing techniques to make sure you know what the article is about throughout it.
The lesser essay did not use such writing techniques which didn’t make them as effective thus did not entice the reader making them understand the points as much. If I was to write this essay or a similar essay I would maybe use more facts and figures, due to the fact these can shock the reader by what has happened, and also as well as what the write has done, I would ensure that the paragraphs are more detailed whilst still addressing the reader.