Thursday, September 17, 2009

the growning population of lacrosse blog--jordan shreiner

THE GROWIGN POPULATION OF LACROSSE

article 1
i completily agree witht eh writers opinions on teh multifaced exposure of lacrosse.
lacrosse as a whole has grown phenomily sence the year 2000 but the publicity its getting isnt all good. the expansion in major league lacrosse has created a way fro people who maybe havent seenthe sport to enjoy it in a city near them. youth lacrosse has grown the fastest any sport has evr grown in the US. this is a well written article with accurate information and well thought out opions. unfortunatly, no never inforation came to mein this article but as a whole i'd say it was very well written.

article 2
in this article the author give s a good descirption of the game and events that regularly accur in it. the enthusiasmt he writer has for the game is very strong and use of descriptive words are very appropriate. Again, nothing learned from the article but i can tell where most mistakes wer made. the writer needs to give more opinions and show how he/she feels about the sport a little more vividly.

article 3
this article is by far the best article writen out of the three. alot of information that i didnt even know of was used to descibe the origins of the game and how it came to be the game we kow of today. this article explains how lacrosse has spred across the worls and effected the ones who have played it. the writer used mostly research information too asnwer the prompt adn made it flow together very well. i would really enjoy talking to theauthor more about how he/she came about finding out so muh about the game. this article could easily be used to give accurate information from eassays to tv broadcasts. well written, a joy to read.

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