Monday, November 30, 2009
Justin Katz Helium 11/30
The topic I chose to review discusses which is better, a male or female dog. I learned a great deal about the similarities and differences between male and female dogs. With the best essays, the authors gave examples by using experiences they have had with both male and female dogs. The essays that weren't as good and they weren't really organized. If I wrote an essay on this topic, I would support that male dogs are better. This is because every dog I've had has been a male.
Justin Katz Helium 11/30
The topic I chose to review this time discusses what to expect when getting a new puppy. I learned by reading these that puppies aren't as easy as people think they are. They take a great deal of training and are quite expensive. The author of the best essay explained a great deal of things. This author also compared getting a new puppy to a great deal of things, which makes the truth become reality. With the essay that wasn't the highest ranked, the author didn't really take time to organize the essay as well. the author also didn't make it interesting as much as the best essay was. If I wrote an essay on this, I would probably write similar to how the best writer did. I would compare having a puppy to other things to draw in peoples' attention as well as make it interesting for them.
Justin Katz Helium 11/30
I reviewed articles on how aggressive dogs can be rehabilitated. I learned from these articles that there are a great deal of ways to rehabilitate aggressive dogs without using Euthanasia. With the best essay, the author used a great deal of organization and writing concepts to make their essay great as well as unique. The lesser essay wasnt as organized and they didnt have supporting facts. If I wrote an article on this topic, I would list the types of ways to rehabilatate dogs as well as explain each step in trying to rehabilitate a dog.
Sunday, November 29, 2009
Turk-Stumble-
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1A4n0h/www.geocities.jp/deal_steal/inu2.html/
2. Interesting to me because I like all kinds of dogs and animals.
3. I recommend this to animal lovers.
4. No sources cited.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1Ge4Y5/www.york.ac.uk/depts/psych/www/about/BIT-1024.swf/
2.Interesting to me because I never seen a brain this big online.
3.I recommend this to people that believe in things like this or not.
4. Sources cited ok.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#6i9ChZ/i121.photobucket.com/albums/o238/KatrinaMarie_photos/Niagrafalls.jpg/
2. I like this because it shows the ancient old stuff.
3. I recommend this because you can learn some old stuff.
4. Sources cited well.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#6i9ChZ/i121.photobucket.com/albums/o238/KatrinaMarie_photos/Niagrafalls.jpg/
(my picture website)
2. Interesting to me because I like all kinds of dogs and animals.
3. I recommend this to animal lovers.
4. No sources cited.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1Ge4Y5/www.york.ac.uk/depts/psych/www/about/BIT-1024.swf/
2.Interesting to me because I never seen a brain this big online.
3.I recommend this to people that believe in things like this or not.
4. Sources cited ok.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#6i9ChZ/i121.photobucket.com/albums/o238/KatrinaMarie_photos/Niagrafalls.jpg/
2. I like this because it shows the ancient old stuff.
3. I recommend this because you can learn some old stuff.
4. Sources cited well.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#6i9ChZ/i121.photobucket.com/albums/o238/KatrinaMarie_photos/Niagrafalls.jpg/
(my picture website)
Turk-Roller Coaster Faces
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#19IoZd/www.slightlywarped.com/crapfactory/curiosities/2009/rollercoasterfunnies.htm/
2.What was the interesting thing to me is all these photos are funny.
3.I reommend this to people that like to laugh at pictures that are crazy.
4.No sources cited.
5.My question be why did these people let theirselves be put on this website like this, less they dont know.
2.Interesting thing to me is that this is a cartoon.
3. I recommend this to people that like to look at crazy cartoons.
4. Sources cited pretty well.
5. My question would be how did the person come up with this cartoon.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1qbl5E/www.czeta.it/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/VALMONT_rgb.jpg/
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1upXOa/www.shambles.net/worldclock/worldclock.swf/
2.This is interesing because I never seen a clock like this. Especially on internet.
3. I recommend this to the people that like to read different clocks.
4.No cources cited.
5.My question would be how did they come up with a clock like this.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#27HH6u/stressbuster1.com/wrapper/always-carry-a-camera//
(My picture website)
2.What was the interesting thing to me is all these photos are funny.
3.I reommend this to people that like to laugh at pictures that are crazy.
4.No sources cited.
5.My question be why did these people let theirselves be put on this website like this, less they dont know.
2.Interesting thing to me is that this is a cartoon.
3. I recommend this to people that like to look at crazy cartoons.
4. Sources cited pretty well.
5. My question would be how did the person come up with this cartoon.
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1qbl5E/www.czeta.it/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/VALMONT_rgb.jpg/
1.http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1upXOa/www.shambles.net/worldclock/worldclock.swf/
2.This is interesing because I never seen a clock like this. Especially on internet.
3. I recommend this to the people that like to read different clocks.
4.No cources cited.
5.My question would be how did they come up with a clock like this.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#27HH6u/stressbuster1.com/wrapper/always-carry-a-camera//
(My picture website)
Best of Blogger-Turk
http://lmcwriting.blogspot.com/2009/09/weird-animals-justin-katz.html
http://lmcwriting.blogspot.com/2009/09/tyricee-pelzer-stoners-volunteer.html
http://lmcwriting.blogspot.com/2009/10/stumble-rashawndra-doby-piano-and.html
Looking at all these blogs I could see that everyone talked about different things. Like animals, drungs, objects like musical instuments, and even plants. When I look at Tyricee`s stumble I could see where he had questions on how someone can tax a stoner when the person who is selling the drug is not even taxed either. I can understand that question myself
Rashawndra`s stumle on pianos being played virtually is different because I have not seen someone stumble about instruments being played online than it actually being a real object. This person shows the differences of how you can stumble about something different from everyone else. Justin Katz`s stumble is about something that everyone can blog about. Weird and odd animals. Anyone can do that, find an animal they have never seen before and stumble about it and it be something "new" to talk about.
From all the stumbles I have seen I have learned that to blog about something completly different sets you aside from all the other bloggs. Which I have learned to do.
http://lmcwriting.blogspot.com/2009/09/tyricee-pelzer-stoners-volunteer.html
http://lmcwriting.blogspot.com/2009/10/stumble-rashawndra-doby-piano-and.html
Looking at all these blogs I could see that everyone talked about different things. Like animals, drungs, objects like musical instuments, and even plants. When I look at Tyricee`s stumble I could see where he had questions on how someone can tax a stoner when the person who is selling the drug is not even taxed either. I can understand that question myself
Rashawndra`s stumle on pianos being played virtually is different because I have not seen someone stumble about instruments being played online than it actually being a real object. This person shows the differences of how you can stumble about something different from everyone else. Justin Katz`s stumble is about something that everyone can blog about. Weird and odd animals. Anyone can do that, find an animal they have never seen before and stumble about it and it be something "new" to talk about.
From all the stumbles I have seen I have learned that to blog about something completly different sets you aside from all the other bloggs. Which I have learned to do.
Monday, November 16, 2009
Stumble upon 1-3 #2 stephen cutlip


This topic caught my eye from being interesting and even more surprising to me in how the situation played out, along with the fact he didn't even know what was going on in tell it was practically over. I would recommend this stumble to my classmates because it is funny and pretty awesome story to be able to get in a shot of a high profile movie. The topic is interesting and a once and a life time opportunity, along with that it isn't to long making it a great stumble to recommend. As for citing his sources he really didn't have any besides stating were he was since his story is all first hand experience. The main question i would have for him would be if he made the cut or not, but that cant be answered in till the movie is out.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#8EVW2f/www.truckspills.com/whale_spill.html/

This blog grab my interest with how bizarre that would be to see in a everyday street. The pictures gave you a good idea how it would to be apart of that and to see others reactions. I also learned that they apparently carry huge whales on tractor trailers as well. I would recommend this to my classmates because everyone enjoys hearing about bizarre incidents specially on the scale that this was. Another reason is because it has good pictures and with these sort of times words are never enough. As for citing his sources he did cite the pictures, just not in great detail naming MSNBC and other for his sources. This isn't great citing but is better than nothing. One question i would have would be how long it took to clean up and how long was the smell in the streets.
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#2Oobo2/www.princeton.edu/~ina/infographics/starbucks.html/
This stumble is interesting to me

Stumble upon 1-3 Stephen Cutlip

http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1ltPoj/v1kram.posterous.com/liu-bolinthe-invisible-man/
This is interesting and new to me because i haven't seen anyone do this before. He paints himself to blind in or look "invisible" in the surrounding environment. I would recommend this to a class mate because it is entertaining and pretty cool to look at. For citing the sources they give credit to the artist at the top but not to who took the picture. One question I would have is how long it took to paint him?

http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#29tQHw/www.photobasement.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/areyoucrazy.jpg/
This link interest me because it has some humor and is also sort of sad in the fact that this person either doesn't know about the Holocaust which is surprising, or he just decided to make fun of it which wasn't the best idea. But the rest of the paper has humor to it. I would recommend this to classmates because it does have humor in it and if they ever wrote a bad paper it wasn't as bad as this one. For citing the source's they didn't really do that because it was suppose to be confidential to the student. One question i would have is how he made it to US history II?
http://www.stumbleupon.com/s/#1FhFTI/www.demonbaby.com/pics/americanworld.gif/
This interest me because it shows how others view Americans as a whole on world knowledge. It's funny because its true on some of

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