Jones Helium M&Ms

The prompt I choose to review on stumble is if plain M&Ms or peanut M&Ms are better. The discussion had a poll and 59% of the people believed that peanut M&Ms are better. I learned that people who do not like peanuts also responded which makes the poll a little biased and only about 300 people took the poll which is a lot less then actually eat M&Ms. In the better essays the writers used personal experiences and used simple language that all readers that were interested in the topic could understand. The better essays had multiple paragraphs that would break up their thoughts and make it simple for the reader to understand each point being made. In the less viewed essay the writer just wrote one long paragraph which made it very difficult to understand what points were going together and which ones were not. The author also had many difficult words that not every reader would be able to understand, which could have been part of the reason that it was not viewed as often. If i were to approach this essay I would use paragraphs and a great introduction about the taste of plain M&Ms, that's what side I would agree with. I would also use the poll as part of my essay because it is interesting to see how many writers took the poll and would include this information.