Helium 9/16 - Young koun Jeon

1. http://www.helium.com/knowledge/1179-sharing-personal-experiences-that-may-benefit-others 2. I learned various people in the world have personal experiences about sexual abuse, child abuse, and other many abuses. It made me so sorrowful and I felt people is suffering in the other side of world.
3. The author described its experience awfully well. When I read the experience of its, I could see what was the author experienced past and I even felt sorry for her somehow. I was so into it.
4. The lesser essays were containing other woe experiences but the explanation was not fittable. The choice of vocabulary was not good which causes little difficult to understand the essay.
5. I would approach to the topic with my experience carefully choosing the vocabulary I am going to use and carefully organize the experience I am going to describe.