Monday, November 30, 2009

Justin Katz Helium 11/30

The topic I chose to review this time discusses what to expect when getting a new puppy. I learned by reading these that puppies aren't as easy as people think they are. They take a great deal of training and are quite expensive. The author of the best essay explained a great deal of things. This author also compared getting a new puppy to a great deal of things, which makes the truth become reality. With the essay that wasn't the highest ranked, the author didn't really take time to organize the essay as well. the author also didn't make it interesting as much as the best essay was. If I wrote an essay on this, I would probably write similar to how the best writer did. I would compare having a puppy to other things to draw in peoples' attention as well as make it interesting for them.

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