Trott,Rieko-Helium

The first promt I looked at was about health & Fitness. The main focuse was the immune system. The immune system is the bodies defense system which fights off bateria and illnesses that try to enter the body on a daily basis. The author of this promt recieved a five star rating. I thing that the author really explained her topic, she was enthusiastic and coordinated her words beautifully. though she was rated five stars, i feel that the author could have been more specific as to who her audience was. She never gave any indication that she was talking to a specific set of people and that is very important. If I had to write about this topic I would probably write it in a similar fashion to how the writer wrote hers'. she was direct and powerful. I would do a better job of identifying my audience to make the promt complete. The second blog I read was about was about ways you could boost you immune system. The author of this promt was not a very good author. he did not get a rating and i could not understand what he was saying. The organization of this promt was very poor and he was not clare about what he was saying. howerver he did metion a few ways to boost your immune system but the overall promt was very unorganized. The last promt i read was very organized and stated who the audienc were. They stated the facts and opinions of the topic and used used them to back up their main points. However, the author did not use many transitional words therefore her writing did not have a good flow to it. I would use more transitional words to link the sentences together, once that is done i believe this promt would be a five star rating.