Helium 9/30 Young koun Jeon San Francisco

http://www.helium.com/knowledge/190939-things-to-do-in-san-franciscos-golden-gate-park
1. Things to do in San Francisco's Golden Gate Park
2. There are many things we can do in Golden Gate Park such as outdoor activities and indoor activities. I want to go to San Francisco sometime.
3. The highest rated article has the explanations on each activites really easy to understand and it makes feeling want to go to San Francisco Golden Gate Park.
4. The lower rated article is not that bad but it still possesses problem with choosing the words and explaining the information about San Francisco Golden Gate Park.
5. I would write the places that makes everybody interesting and the most recommended restaurant. Because the food is one of the most enjoyment